Guardian (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} guardianhunter) wrote in eyezofwolf, |
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*smiles*
*reading from your last sentence*.... There's only one error I saw....
He jerked around when he heard the woman behind her and fell to the ground
Is it supposed to say "woman behind her" or behind "him"?
Otherwise, this starts out very interestingly!!! Can't wait for more!! YAAAAY!!!!!
*smiles*
*reading from your last sentence*.... There's only one error I saw....
He jerked around when he heard the woman behind her and fell to the ground
Is it supposed to say "woman behind her" or behind "him"?
Otherwise, this starts out very interestingly!!! Can't wait for more!! YAAAAY!!!!!
