Dylan Birtolo (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} eyezofwolf) wrote, |
Re: aha, now some things have been made clearer.
No problem - you didn't sign in on your previous post either, but I figured out who it was.
I am aware that Syr's death is early and premature, and he could have been developed more. I have a lot more information about him and who he is written down in my notes, but his death seemed to "fit" there... In the actual pieces (as opposed to the summary) you get a little more feel for his character and his relationship with Nik.
As for Rienna, it's principle and something else, but I won't speak too much about that. The one thing that is maybe not clear from the way it is written is that she knew Elliena would agree with her and go with her, she never questioned that.
No problem - you didn't sign in on your previous post either, but I figured out who it was.
I am aware that Syr's death is early and premature, and he could have been developed more. I have a lot more information about him and who he is written down in my notes, but his death seemed to "fit" there... In the actual pieces (as opposed to the summary) you get a little more feel for his character and his relationship with Nik.
As for Rienna, it's principle and something else, but I won't speak too much about that. The one thing that is maybe not clear from the way it is written is that she knew Elliena would agree with her and go with her, she never questioned that.
